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In the world of cultivation, talent is a gift, but resources are the fuel. Yang Kai had the Golden Skeleton, but he quickly realized a harsh truth: a god-level foundation requires an astronomical amount of energy to maintain.
To continue his growth, Yang Kai needed “Three-Leafed Flowers” and “Cedar Grass”—medicinal herbs that are essential for tempering the body. But at the Contribution Hall, under the watchful and greedy eyes of Treasurer Meng, nothing comes for free.
The scene is tense as Yang Kai counts his meager savings. For years, he had lived as a lowly sweeper, scraping together every copper coin and contribution point he could find. He had finally reached a breakthrough, but the cost of the herbs he needed was enough to wipe out his entire life savings in a single moment.
“Money is temporary, but strength is eternal,” Yang Kai mused as he handed over his hard-earned points. In an instant, he went from a small-time “rich” disciple to a man on the verge of bankruptcy. He left the hall with his hands full of herbs but his pockets completely empty.
However, Yang Kai didn’t feel regret. He knew that to reach the Martial Peak, one must be willing to sacrifice everything. As he swallowed the bitter herbs and felt the energy rushing through his veins, he realized that being broke was a small price to pay for the power to finally stand tall. The struggle for money had ended, but the struggle for survival in the upcoming sect competition was just beginning.
Why this works for YouTube:
* The “Relatable” Struggle: Every viewer understands the pain of being “broke.” Using this as a plot point makes Yang Kai feel more human and relatable.
* The Risk vs. Reward: It shows the protagonist’s determination—he is willing to gamble his entire livelihood just for a chance at getting stronger.
* Setting the Stakes: By becoming “bankrupt,” the story forces Yang Kai to go back into danger (to hunt or fight) to earn more, which naturally sets up the action for the next chapter.
Should we move on to Chapter 11, where Yang Kai puts these expensive herbs to use?

Every great hero needs a mentor, or at least, a mysterious guide. For Yang Kai, that person is the eccentric and greedy Treasurer Meng.
In the Ling Xiao Pavilion, Treasurer Meng is known as the old man who runs the Contribution Hall—a place where disciples trade their hard-earned points for herbs and manuals. To most, he is just a grumpy old miser who loves money more than cultivation. But Yang Kai, with his sharpened instincts, begins to sense that there is much more to this old man than meets the eye.
After his breakthrough, Yang Kai arrives at the hall to trade the few herbs he gathered in the mountains. He expects a simple transaction, but instead, he enters a battle of wits. Treasurer Meng is sharp, observant, and possesses a gaze that seems to pierce through Yang Kai’s very soul. It’s as if the old man can sense the Golden Skeleton hidden beneath Yang Kai’s skin.
Despite his rough exterior and his love for haggling, Meng Wu Ya shows a strange interest in Yang Kai. While other elders saw “trash,” Meng sees a spark of something ancient and unyielding. The interaction is filled with humor and tension—a classic “Old Fox vs. Young Lion” dynamic.
As Yang Kai leaves the hall with his rewards, he realizes that in the world of martial arts, power isn’t always found in flashy techniques; sometimes, it’s hidden in the hands of a lonely treasurer in a dusty room. The mystery of the Black Book is his own, but the mystery of Treasurer Meng has only just begun to unfold.
Why this works for YouTube:
* Character Archetype: The “Hidden Master” or “Wise Eccentric” is a fan-favorite character type. Introducing him adds flavor to the story beyond just fighting.
* World Building: Explaining the “Contribution Hall” gives the audience a better understanding of how the sect functions.
* The “Secret” Tension: The idea that Meng might know Yang Kai’s secret adds a layer of suspense that keeps viewers watching.
Would you like me to continue with Chapter 10, where the action picks up again?

With his new strength, Yang Kai ventured deeper into the Black Wind Mountains. He wasn’t the same weakling who struggled to breathe after a short walk; now, he moved with the grace of a predator. But the mountains are home to more than just wild beasts—they are home to secrets and unexpected dangers.
While resting by a stream, Yang Kai’s sharpened senses picked up a disturbance. Through the thick foliage, he caught sight of a figure that seemed out of place in this rugged wilderness. It was a young woman, possessing a beauty that could topple cities, her “thin waist” swaying with a delicate yet dangerous elegance.
However, this was no damsel in distress. She was Xia Ning Chang, a top-tier disciple with cultivation far beyond anything Yang Kai had ever encountered. She was on a mission, hunting for a rare medicinal treasure, but she was being pursued by powerful enemies.
Yang Kai watched from the shadows, his breath held tight. In the past, he would have been invisible to someone of her status—a mere speck of dust. But today, with the Golden Skeleton pulsing in his chest, his perspective had shifted. He wasn’t just a spectator anymore; he was a witness to a high-level pursuit that could turn deadly at any second.
As the tension in the forest reached a breaking point, Yang Kai realized that his path to the “Martial Peak” wouldn’t just be about training in solitude. It would involve crossing paths with the powerful, the beautiful, and the dangerous. The encounter with this mysterious beauty was a reminder: the world is vast, and his journey has only just begun.
Why this works for YouTube:
* The “Encounter” Trope: Introducing a high-level character (Xia Ning Chang) creates a power gap that makes the audience wonder how Yang Kai will eventually catch up to her.
* Cinematic Detail: Focusing on the “Black Wind Mountains” setting and the contrast between her elegance and the harsh wilderness makes for great visual storytelling.
* The Tease: It moves the plot forward by showing that the world outside the Ling Xiao Pavilion is much more dangerous than the bullies he faced at home.
Would you like me to continue with Chapter 9, where the mystery deepens?

The air inside Yang Kai’s small hut felt electric, heavy with the scent of sweat and ancient power. Since the Golden Skeleton merged with his body, his cultivation had been moving at a terrifying speed. Today was the day everything would change. He wasn’t just training; he was pushing himself toward a total breakthrough.

In the world of martial arts, “Breaking through a stage” isn’t just an upgrade—it is like being reborn.
As Yang Kai sat in a meditative posture, the energy from the golden bones surged through his meridians like a tidal wave of molten gold. He could hear his own heartbeat sounding like a war drum. The bottlenecks that had held him back for three long years—the barriers that made him the laughingstock of the Ling Xiao Pavilion—began to crack.
Then, it happened. A sudden boom echoed within his soul.

The impurities of his past self were forced out of his pores in a black, foul-smelling mist. His muscles tightened, his bones hardened, and his vision became so sharp he could see the dust motes dancing in the moonlight. He had successfully broken through to the Tempered Body Stage, and he had done it with a foundation stronger than anyone in the sect could imagine.

Yang Kai stood up, feeling as light as a feather yet as heavy as a mountain. He clenched his fist, and the air whistled under the pressure. The “trash” disciple was dead. In his place stood a cultivator who had truly stepped onto the path of the Martial Peak. The world hadn’t changed, but Yang Kai had—and very soon, the Ling Xiao Pavilion would realize that their quietest servant had become their most dangerous threat.

Why this works for YouTube:
* The Concept of Rebirth: Viewers love “Evolution” sequences. Describing the physical change (black mist/purification) makes the power-up feel visual and earned.
* Sense of Scale: Highlighting that he broke a “3-year bottleneck” emphasizes his struggle, making the success more satisfying for the audience.
* The Final Hook: Ending with the warning that he is now a “dangerous threat” builds massive anticipation for the first real fight after his breakthrough.
Shall we move on to Chapter 8 to see how he tests this new power?

The morning sun rose over Ling Xiao Pavilion, but Yang Kai was no longer the exhausted boy who had collapsed the night before. Inside his body, a miracle had taken place. The Golden Skeleton had fully integrated with his frame, and for the first time in his life, Yang Kai felt alive. His senses were sharper, his muscles hummed with hidden power, and his spirit was as calm as a deep lake.
But power requires fuel. Starving from the intense transformation, Yang Kai headed into the nearby hills to hunt. In the past, he would have struggled to catch a rabbit, but now? He moved like a shadow. Every step was light, every movement precise. With his new strength, he easily took down game that would have outrun him days ago.
As he was returning, he encountered a sight that would change the course of his day. A group of disciples were gathered, and among them was a beautiful female disciple in distress. In the world of martial arts, “a precious horse deserves a fine saddle, and a hero deserves the company of a beauty.”
However, Yang Kai wasn’t looking for romance—he was looking for respect. When a conflict broke out with some arrogant disciples, Yang Kai didn’t back down. For the first time, he didn’t just endure the blows; he felt he could strike back. The aura around him had shifted so much that even the “beauties” of the sect began to look at this “lowly sweeper” with confused curiosity.
The transformation was no longer just internal. The world was starting to notice that the punching bag of Ling Xiao Pavilion had grown teeth. The hunt for food was over; the hunt for greatness had begun.
Why this works for YouTube:
* The Transition: This chapter marks the shift from “Suffering” to “Success.” Viewers love the “First Win” moment.
* Humor & Tropes: The “Beauty and the Hero” trope is a classic staple in cultivation stories that keeps the audience engaged with character dynamics.
* The Tease: Ending with the idea that he has “grown teeth” prepares the audience for the inevitable fights in the next chapters.
Would you like me to continue with Chapter 7, where things get even more intense?

The transformation was not a gift—it was a war. As the Golden Skeleton fused with Yang Kai’s body, his small hut became an altar of agony. This wasn’t just a power-up; it was a brutal reconstruction of his entire being.
Yang Kai felt his bones shattering one by one, replaced by a divine, indestructible metal. A voice, ancient and prideful, echoed in his mind, demanding he surrender. The “Proud Golden Statue” within the skeleton sought to crush his consciousness and take over his body. To the skeleton, Yang Kai was just a weak vessel, an ant unworthy of such god-like power.

“Do you want to submit?” the golden phantom seemed to sneer.
But the phantom didn’t know who it was dealing with. This was the boy who had endured 147 humiliations without blinking. If the world couldn’t break him, a skeleton wouldn’t either. With a roar of pure defiance, Yang Kai fought back. He didn’t just accept the pain; he embraced it, using his unyielding willpower to chain the golden energy to his soul.

Slowly, the blinding radiance began to settle. The agonizing fire turned into a soothing warmth that flowed through his new marrow. When Yang Kai opened his eyes, he was different. His skin glowed with a faint, metallic luster, and a newfound strength surged through his veins.

The transition was complete. The Golden Skeleton was no longer a guest—it was his. As he stood up, the floorboards beneath him creaked under the weight of his new density. The servant of Ling Xiao Pavilion was gone. A monster in human skin had just been born.
Why this works for YouTube:
* Conflict & Tension: This chapter highlights the internal battle. Viewers love seeing a protagonist “earn” their power through suffering rather than getting it for free.
* Character Development: It reinforces Yang Kai’s greatest strength—not his new skeleton, but his indomitable will.
* The “Power Scale” Tease: Mentioning that he is now a “monster in human skin” sets high expectations for the next chapter, where he will likely test this strength on his bullies.
Would you like me to move on to Chapter 6, where Yang Kai finally starts to show off his new power?

The night was heavy with silence as Yang Kai sat alone in his cramped, wooden hut. On his lap lay the mysterious object that had shared his bed for a year—the “Wordless Black Book.” For twelve long months, it had been nothing more than a cold, dark slab, but tonight, the atmosphere changed.

As Yang Kai focused his gaze, the pitch-black surface began to ripple like water. Suddenly, a blinding light erupted, swallowing the darkness of the room. The book didn’t just open; it came to life. On its first page, four words appeared, glowing with an ancient and terrifying power: “The Unyielding Golden Skeleton.”

Before he could even breathe, the book transformed into a vortex of golden energy. From the pages emerged a skeleton—not made of bone, but of pure, shimmering gold. It felt as though an ancient god was standing before him. Without warning, the golden skeleton lunged, merging into Yang Kai’s very soul.

The pain was beyond anything he had felt in his 147 defeats. It felt as if his bones were being crushed and recast in liquid fire. His old, weak frame was being replaced by a celestial structure. When the light finally faded, the black book remained, but the first page was no longer blank. It now contained a set of instructions that would change his life forever.

Yang Kai realized that his years of suffering and his refusal to give up had finally paid off. The world saw a lowly sweeper, but the heavens had granted him the ultimate foundation. The “trash” of Ling Xiao Pavilion was gone; in his place stood the successor of a legendary power.
Why this works for YouTube:
* The Reveal: This chapter contains the first “Power Up” (The Golden Skeleton). In YouTube videos, this is the moment where you use epic, high-energy music.
* Visual Imagery: Describing the “Liquid Fire” and the “Glowing Gold” helps the audience visualize the transformation, even if you are only using static images or AI art.
* The Transition: It shifts the story from a “sad underdog story” to an “epic action journey,” which keeps viewers hooked for the next episode.
Would you like me to continue with Chapter 5, where we see the first results of his new power?

In the world of martial arts, defeat is usually a sign of weakness. But for Yang Kai, it was becoming a ritual of strength. Today marked a staggering milestone in the Ling Xiao Pavilion: his 147th consecutive loss.
As Yang Kai lay in the dirt, his body battered and his breathing heavy, the crowd didn’t hold back. To them, he was a joke—a “trash” disciple who didn’t know when to quit. But as he wiped the blood from his lip and stood up for the hundredth time, the laughter started to fade into an uneasy silence. There was something terrifying about a man who refuses to stay down.
Returning to his lonely, dilapidated hut, Yang Kai’s body was a map of bruises and pain. Every bone ached, and every muscle screamed. But he wasn’t broken. He reached under his pillow and pulled out his only possession: the mysterious Black Book.
This was his secret. He had noticed a strange pattern—every time he was beaten, every time his blood spilled onto this cold, dark relic, something changed. The book seemed to pulse with a hidden life, absorbing his pain and tempering his body in the shadows. He wasn’t just losing; he was being forged.
The 147th defeat wasn’t a mark of shame. It was the final layer of weakness being burned away. Little did the sect know, the boy they mocked was using their blows to build a foundation that would eventually shake the heavens. The sweeping servant was no longer just a servant; he was a warrior waiting for his moment.
Why this works for YouTube:
* The Hook: Starting with the number “147 losses” immediately grabs attention—it makes the viewer curious about why he keeps fighting.
* The Mystery: Introducing the “Black Book” (or the mystery object) at the end creates a “cliffhanger,” making people want to click on the next video.
* Emotional Connection: It portrays the “Underdog” theme, which is the most successful trope in YouTube storytelling.
Would you like me to rewrite Chapter 4 in this same English style?

In the world of martial arts, defeat is usually a sign of weakness. But for Yang Kai, it was becoming a ritual of strength. Today marked a staggering milestone in the Ling Xiao Pavilion: his 147th consecutive loss.
As Yang Kai lay in the dirt, his body battered and his breathing heavy, the crowd didn’t hold back. To them, he was a joke—a “trash” disciple who didn’t know when to quit. But as he wiped the blood from his lip and stood up for the hundredth time, the laughter started to fade into an uneasy silence. There was something terrifying about a man who refuses to stay down.
Returning to his lonely, dilapidated hut, Yang Kai’s body was a map of bruises and pain. Every bone ached, and every muscle screamed. But he wasn’t broken. He reached under his pillow and pulled out his only possession: the mysterious Black Stone.
This was his secret. He had noticed a strange pattern—every time he was beaten, every time his blood spilled onto this cold, dark relic, something changed. The stone seemed to pulse with a hidden life, absorbing his pain and tempering his body in the shadows. He wasn’t just losing; he was being forged.
The 147th defeat wasn’t a mark of shame. It was the final layer of weakness being burned away. Little did the sect know, the boy they mocked was using their blows to build a foundation that would eventually shake the heavens. The sweeping servant was no longer just a servant; he was a warrior waiting for his moment.
Why this works for YouTube:
* The Hook: Starting with the number “147 losses” immediately grabs attention—it makes the viewer curious about why he keeps fighting.
* The Mystery: Introducing the “Black Stone” at the end creates a “cliffhanger,” making people want to click on the next video to find out what the stone does.
* Emotional Connection: It portrays the “Underdog” theme, which is the most successful trope in YouTube storytelling.
Would you like me to rewrite Chapter 4 in this same English style?

In the hierarchy of the Ling Xiao Pavilion, strength is the only law, and for someone like Yang Kai, every day is a battle for dignity. Despite being the weakest among the disciples, Yang Kai possessed a trait that many lacked: an iron will that refused to shatter.

The challenge was set. Yang Kai stood across from Zhou Ding Jun, an opponent far superior in both strength and cultivation. To the onlookers, the match seemed like a farce—a lamb walking into a slaughterhouse. As the fight began, the gap in power was immediate. Each of Zhou’s strikes landed with heavy, bone-jarring force, sending Yang Kai crashing into the dirt again and again.
Dust clouded the air, and the taste of copper filled Yang Kai’s mouth. His body screamed in agony, his muscles protested every movement, and the mocking laughter of the surrounding disciples stung more than the physical wounds. Yet, every time the crowd thought he was finished, Yang Kai’s trembling hands would grip the earth, and he would force himself back onto his feet.
Zhou Ding Jun grew increasingly frustrated. He expected a quick surrender, but instead, he faced a boy whose eyes burned with a terrifying, silent defiance. Yang Kai wasn’t just fighting an opponent; he was fighting against his own limitations, pushing past the pain to temper his soul.

By the end of the duel, though bloodied and battered, Yang Kai remained standing. He had lost the fight, but he had won a far greater battle within himself. In the dirt of the Ling Xiao Pavilion, a legend was being forged—not through easy victories, but through the refusal to ever back down.
Would you like me to continue with Chapter 3 or adjust the tone of this version?